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As the header says this is a place for anyone to leave RP related concrit. I can't promise to follow every suggestion, but I will read it and make every effort to learn from it.

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From:

shehasdreams

I really liked what we were writing in that meme. I don't know if you would like to continue it or do something else? I wanted to make sure my replies were okay or if you wanted me to leave you alone.

From:

retrieverchef

Yeah, your replies were fine. :) I'd love to explore the aftermath. Either in the meme or elsewhere. Because this one's really going to mess with Eliot. Before, it was either because she pretty much demanded it or because he was trying to protect himself. This time, he's essentially selling himself to protect someone else and I'd love to poke around and see what he does with that. If you're interested, that is?

From:

shehasdreams

I would too. We didn't get very far in our replies so we can assume pretty much anything happened if you want. I kind of liked where they were headed and would love to play it out, but we can also move on.

I'd love to see what happens.

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shehasdreams

It's up to you and what you're comfortable with. I'm not too familiar with your man's history, just because I didn't see it in his journal or profile. I wasn't sure if you were canon or au or what. I'm open to whatever. That one meme was good because she probably would have made the first move, but we can also do something else too.

From:

retrieverchef

He's AU. Very much AU. I basically took Eliot's adult life and shoved it into his teen years and modified the setting. I'm planning to make a separate journal for the AU when I can get my hands on some icons the right age. If you want, I can give you a canon and an AU rundown on Eliot. Which meme were you referring to? I haven't gotten around to seeing what got posted today yet.

From:

shehasdreams

I thought he might be AU. That's kind of what I found attractive about him, that he might be darker.

We were having them meet in the mating season meme. Or we can start fresh?

From:

retrieverchef

*facepalm* Gah! I forgot about that! I got stuck on Eli's reaction, and then the tag got buried... Sorry!

But, yeah, I tend to play Eliot darker. In the angsty sense, not the sadistic sense. When he goes dark, he's the broody, blame-himself- for-everything type.

*runs off to tag back*

From:

shehasdreams

You don't have to tag if you don't want to or you're busy. It's okay.

From:

retrieverchef

No! I wanted to. Still do. That's just one of a handful of threads that got kinda buried in my inbox... I'm starting to think maybe I should make myself a folder for unanswered tags so it doesn't happen so much...