Eliot's HMD

[retrieverchef]

As the header says this is a place for anyone to leave RP related concrit. I can't promise to follow every suggestion, but I will read it and make every effort to learn from it.

Comments

[shehasdreams]

I really liked what we were writing in that meme. I don't know if you would like to continue it or do something else? I wanted to make sure my replies were okay or if you wanted me to leave you alone.

[retrieverchef]

Yeah, your replies were fine. :) I'd love to explore the aftermath. Either in the meme or elsewhere. Because this one's really going to mess with Eliot. Before, it was either because she pretty much demanded it or because he was trying to protect himself. This time, he's essentially selling himself to protect someone else and I'd love to poke around and see what he does with that. If you're interested, that is?

[shehasdreams]

I would too. We didn't get very far in our replies so we can assume pretty much anything happened if you want. I kind of liked where they were headed and would love to play it out, but we can also move on.

I'd love to see what happens.

[shehasdreams]

It's up to you and what you're comfortable with. I'm not too familiar with your man's history, just because I didn't see it in his journal or profile. I wasn't sure if you were canon or au or what. I'm open to whatever. That one meme was good because she probably would have made the first move, but we can also do something else too.

[retrieverchef]

He's AU. Very much AU. I basically took Eliot's adult life and shoved it into his teen years and modified the setting. I'm planning to make a separate journal for the AU when I can get my hands on some icons the right age. If you want, I can give you a canon and an AU rundown on Eliot. Which meme were you referring to? I haven't gotten around to seeing what got posted today yet.

so sorry, forgot who I was logged in as. <3

[shehasdreams]

I thought he might be AU. That's kind of what I found attractive about him, that he might be darker.

We were having them meet in the mating season meme. Or we can start fresh?

Re: so sorry, forgot who I was logged in as. <3

[retrieverchef]

*facepalm* Gah! I forgot about that! I got stuck on Eli's reaction, and then the tag got buried... Sorry!

But, yeah, I tend to play Eliot darker. In the angsty sense, not the sadistic sense. When he goes dark, he's the broody, blame-himself- for-everything type.

*runs off to tag back*

[shehasdreams]

You don't have to tag if you don't want to or you're busy. It's okay.

[retrieverchef]

No! I wanted to. Still do. That's just one of a handful of threads that got kinda buried in my inbox... I'm starting to think maybe I should make myself a folder for unanswered tags so it doesn't happen so much...

[shehasdreams]

I didn't want to poke you in case you were busy. <3

I'll go tag then. And we can explore anything you want.

[retrieverchef]

Cool. :) And feel free to poke me.

[shehasdreams]

Poke or naughty, dirty pokes.

[retrieverchef]

Poke. Although the other could apply to Eli in the thread...

[shehasdreams]

Hahaha. Great minds...

[hart_or_hand]

Yes, I'd like that, too. :-) And you're right. We do need a name for their verse. Quick question, though. How connected do you want the threads with canon Eliot to be to the threads with teen Eliot?

[captainsosa]

:D Yes, we do. Any ideas? Hmmm that is a good question, I wouldn't mind them being pretty well connected perhaps just minus Lyla? Then again I do like the idea of them having a daughter together even as adults from when they were teens. Hmmm. I'll leave that one up to you. :P

[retrieverchef]

No, no ideas off hand yet. I think they'd be more likely to have met up while Eliot was in Special Forces. But I also like the idea of them having a kid together, even as adults. But canon Eliot wouldn't have slept with Charisa until after Aimee married someone else, so any kid they had together wouldn't be more than 10 at the most.

[captainsosa]

None here either, I like to be creative with verse names so it might take awhile. I actually like that to be honest, since she's military it makes plenty of sense. Also, same goes with Charisa she wouldn't have done anything with Eliot till her and Face split and knew Eliot was ready to move on from Aimee. That actually works for me.

We can keep the teen AU we have going separate then, perhaps at times just bring it up in a meme for shits and giggles.

[retrieverchef]

That's what I was thinking. :-) I'd like to see her bust him sometime after he leaves the military, though. Perhaps even during the time where he's pretty much given up on himself. It would be an interesting dynamic with those two.

Yeah, that sounds good to me.

[captainsosa]

Great minds think alike. I was just thinking something like that to be honest. Could always be a flashback type scenario, when their going through a rough patch or something...or god forbid a story for Lyla lol.

Awesome.

Did you want to start something up in your journal when you get the chance or would you like me to? Either is fine with me. And there is no rush, I'm still enjoying our memes very much.